Kia ora, I am a Year 8 student at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in the Kia Manawanui syndicate and my teachers are Ms. Komor & Ms. Aireen.
Kia Ora Jose, I really like how you blogged about our Solar System review! It is really interesting to read about what you learnt about the solar system! To improve you can probably add a description talking about what you were doing etc. Also make sure your information is written in your own words! Ka Pai!
Kia Ora Jose,
ReplyDeleteI really like how you blogged about our Solar System review! It is really interesting to read about what you learnt about the solar system! To improve you can probably add a description talking about what you were doing etc. Also make sure your information is written in your own words! Ka Pai!
- Lydia!